GMan seems to be rubbing off on her already!
Giggity
No comment. XD
But yeah after the marriage they can passively influence each other emotionally; side-effects of an eternal union.
Note to self, dont mess with dusk’s things o.o
Yeah, this is some good horror. And nice thematic stuff, what with you proving to the soldiers what’s worse!
I must admit I did find the action a bit confusing. Was the headcrab flying towards the briefcase, or did it crawl out of it? I think a brief, small shot of it flying towards/crawling out of the briefcase beforehand could help the direction of action
Yeah I originally was gonna have a shot like that… but… wait… I can’t remember why I didn’t take one now. ._. But it was meant to have just sorta grabbed onto the briefcase prior to the Marine knocking it away, haha.
I must admit action is not my strong point; I am going to continue working on improving it as I go when it’s needed… as I have one scene in particular I want to do for chapter 3 which is going to take some work when I get to it. 
Feel free to post WIP stuff or showcase ideas if you want input. There are a lot of people here who are good at capturing that flow in a comic
Headcrab suitcase tackle, early candidate for best action shot of 2024.