Okay so G-Man getting high I was not expecting (I still choose to ignore what you’re calling him in this series btw XD), but Eli’s plan for Breen made me laugh.
The action-sequences are as usual very good, I liked Mossman’s jump at the end too.
Also I find it so funny that nearly everyone at Black Mesa East is wearing a suit for some reason.
Anyways! To main thing here is that G-Man looks great in this comic; I am not disappointed. The fact we got a short conversation between him and the Doctor was cool, and wasn’t something I was expecting.
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Dergi, that was a really fun read. From the DOPE dialogue, to the crazy actions scenes, I kept smiling throughout the whole comic. Also, them smoking weed and changing Gman’s name to G-spot man, gave me a good laugh.
As for feedback, what would work really well for your comic, instead of having the title of the comic as black text over on orange box, is to imitate the text from the oficial Half Life 2 posters.
The other thing, for screenshots that involve a lot of work, such as those 2 that show what Black Mesa East is like, I would personally make them big. And when I say big, I mean like them taking up half the page.
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I’d recognise those gloves anywhere… Had a feeling that reskin was gonna be used for this comic
That was a wild ride,
seeing the two of them interacting yet maintaining the competitive and abrasive relation even in this comedic over-the-top setting was a fantastic choice.
Extremely well written 
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Echoing Dusk’s and Arctic’s sentiments, I really must say you outdid yourself on the actions scenes.
I especially like Mossman’s various panels - the zombie getting gunned down ina splash of blood while she looks elsewhere, the gorgeous ”piece of trash” panel and, of course, the ending sequence.
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